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#76 Re: Not So Free Chat » Ten Thousand Martians » 2005-02-16 21:36:33

I'll post some of my work on the above named novel here.  I don't know if I'll put it all on the web like RobS or not.  I might just post parts that I want to show off or that I need help on.

I've been creating the overall design and structure of my story up until now, but Rob said he wanted to see some of my work.  So here goes nothing!

I've already decided to completely change this.  It's a first attempt at coherent thought to see how I write.  Tear it to shreds like Willard's rats!

Ten Thousand Martians

Chapter I

    Returning to the bleachers with his third root beer that afternoon, Mark sat and looked through the humid air across the green field at the white and black monolith.  The Goliath rocket sat on the launch pad, poised for another attempt at making history.  It carried the first shipment of cargo for the crew that would retrieve it almost three years later.  For three days Mark had been sitting in these bleachers, but as it was the Goliath’s first launch, the engineers were being extra careful.  Two launches were announced, delayed, and then cancelled.  Perhaps number three would be the lucky one.  As everyone knew, the Boss didn’t like to take chances, so Mark wasn’t going to get too excited until he actually saw Goliath in the air.

    Looking for something to do to pass the time, Mark opened up his laptop and found a news website.  He clicked on the latest video report about the launch, interested in how the media was handling the three day delay.  It showed a reporter interviewing the CEO of Interplanetary Transportation Inc., Ian Flint.  This got Mark’s attention because there was just something about the Boss that at once excited and put a person at ease – something about the passion in his voice, the trustworthiness in his tone.

    “Mr. Flint, can you tell our viewers why it’s taking so long to launch your rocket, the Goliath?” asked the reporter somewhat accusingly.

    “Well, frankly we could have launched it two days ago with little risk.  In fact, most of my engineers advised me to do so,” replied Ian Flint.

    “So, what’s the hold up?”

    “As I’m sure you know, this is the very first launch of the Goliath rocket.  First launches usually get delayed.  It is also the biggest rocket ever built and key to our settlement initiative.  We don’t want anything to go wrong.  I personally called for the delay after hearing reports of a minor problem in our backup guidance system on the third stage.”

    “And the second delay?”

    “You see, that’s why I’m glad we delayed a little.  Yesterday, after a thorough review, we found that the primary guidance system was susceptible to a similar failure, but both have been fixed and we should be on our way to Mars within the hour.”

    “Well, there you have it folks, straight from the horse’s mouth,” the reporter said turning to the camera, “get ready to cheer at the liftoff of the first cargo flight for the first permanent colonists of Mars!”

    Turning back to her guest the reporter thanked Mr. Flint then asked, “Any closing comments for the millions of viewers watching this historic event?”

    “I’d just like to thank all those who have believed that we could do this and who have lent their support to our effort.  Today marks the end of a long hard struggle to fund, design, and develop the vehicles for our settlement program.  It also marks the beginning of another struggle – the struggle to populate a new world.  I want to tell all the young people watching this today, ‘you can live on another planet!’  When I was a child it was just a dream, but it is your future if you want it.  On to Mars!”

    Mark loved hearing Ian Flint speak.  What he said wasn’t that creative or new, but he said it with such feeling!

    Sipping on his root beer, Mark browsed through the website’s information about Goliath.  There were always corrections to be made, and Mark loved doing it.  He found the first mistake almost immediately.  They had mixed up the lifting capacity of the Goliath.  Instead of listing how much mass it could put into low earth orbit (LEO) as 200 metric tons it had used 106 metric tons – the mass of the vehicle without fuel.  He started composing an email to the webmaster immediately.  Bad information was just a pet peeve of his.

Half way through his email he heard thunder.  Looking up he thought, how can there be thunder on a sunny afternoon?  Then he saw everyone in the bleachers on their feet.  The Goliath had already cleared the tower and was rising slowly into the sky.  He had missed the countdown over the loudspeaker.  How could I zone out writing an email, he thought.  But, he folded up his laptop and enjoyed the view.  The Goliath, painted white and black in the fashion of the old Saturn V, was ten meters wide like the Saturn V, but kept that diameter almost all the way to the top where it smoothly curved into a blunt nose.  Strapped to the sides of the rocket were four slender liquid fueled boosters in pairs on either side.

The Goliath seemed too heavy for the four pillars of fire it was ascending on until one remembered the transparent flames of the first stage’s four engines.  Angling over the Atlantic, the Goliath thundered ever higher, ever faster toward its destination.  In a sudden flurry, all four boosters separated like the opening of a flower’s petals.  The rocket continued climbing, dropping the first stage into the sea, followed later by the second.  Within minutes the troublesome third stage had put Cargo Zero into an elliptical orbit around Earth.

For hours afterward the crowd of spectators milled about discussing the launch, space, and the future, but Mark had no time for this.  Rushing to his new destination, he marveled over the same things the crowd was discussing.  He had seen some Ares launches before, and he had seen some Energia launches on the television, but this topped them all.  The shear size and power of the Goliath was enough to awe, but the emotional element – this was a colony ship – was what inspired.  He knew that it was just a cargo ship, but it was proof that humans were going out into space to stay.  It was only two more years until the first settlers would set off to Mars.

Before he knew it, Mark had crossed the field between the bleachers and the launch control facilities.  After passing through two security checkpoints he entered the main building.  Looking up at the ITI logo, a black and white checkerboard pattern reminiscent of the old Saturn V, he shook his head.  Who would have thought that a private company would be the first to send settlers to another planet?  Well, he didn’t care who did it; he was just glad to be on board.

As he entered the observation room Ian Flint came over to him immediately.  They shook hands and smiled briefly before Mr. Flint rushed him over to a crowd of smiling faces.  He was now part of a group of thirty people facing another group armed with cameras.

“I present to you the pioneers of Mars!” Ian Flint announced ceremoniously.

The cameras erupted in waves of flashes and clicks nearly blinding all their smiling targets.  This was the thing Mark hated most about being on the team, and it was part of why he had watched the launch from the bleachers.  He also liked the bleachers because that’s where he used to watch launches as a kid.

After the pictures all the astronaut settlers talked among themselves until the Boss pulled them away one by one to meet a V.I.P., usually a congressperson or foreign diplomat.  While awaiting his turn at company PR, Mark talked to Rosalía Arellano and Vicente Marquez.  It was a while before he was called, but finally Mark was pulled aside.
“Me gustaría introducirle a Marcos Morgan,” Ian Flint said in fluent Spanish to the guest at his side.

“Presidente Fuentes, mucho gusto en conocerle,” Mark said recognizing the President of Mexico.

#77 Re: Not So Free Chat » Mars Frontier Novel - New web location » 2005-02-14 21:46:23

Oh Rob, you crack me up!   :laugh:
Is everybody on Mars going to become Bahai?
I'm sure it's a fine religion, but two converts in one volume?  :laugh:
So, when is the Bahai religion going to sponsor an astronaut, or an entire crew for that matter?

Anyway, about your silane engines in the Sunwing E; as far as I understand, when silane burns in CO2 it makes silica (SiO2) among other things.  Basically, silica is sand.  From your description in chapter 12, it sounds like to run the propellers you're using silane in an internal combustion engine -- which sand would ruin pretty quickly.  Is this what you meant?

From earlier chapters I thought you had silane rockets on the Sunwings.  Did you change things up?

#78 Re: Not So Free Chat » Mars Frontier Novel - New web location » 2005-02-09 14:32:12

You know, since I'm working on my own Mars novel, I had better not sabotage it.  You already have so many good ideas, it's going to be hard not to steal them.  So, I'll just hang onto mine. 

By the way, I've got my own idea for a twist in the old radiation problem -- too little radiation.

#79 Re: Not So Free Chat » New free chat issue - Opinions? » 2005-02-08 15:33:21

Bill, correct me if I am wrong, you being the resident lawyer (albeit in a different field), but isn't there an old saying, "ownership is nine-tenths of the law"?

Um...ownership is the law.  I think you mean "possesion is nine-tenths of the law".

This also makes the Moon treaty so stupid.  Whoever goes out and claims extraterrestrial territory will own it, and people will get used to it.  Logic dictates that since they made the effort to get there they should own and control a reasonable expanse of land.

#80 Re: Life support systems » Backpacking on Mars - A base in a backpack... possible? » 2005-02-08 15:24:52

As for the seal...

1.  take a single verticle opening,
2.  attach a strong but flexible U-shaped connector along the length of each side of the opening,
3.  interlock the two Us and
4.  pressurize.

Like this:

------------------------------\
           /---------------------o|
          |o---------------------/
           \-------------------------------------

What do you think, Robert?

#81 Re: Not So Free Chat » New free chat issue - Opinions? » 2005-02-08 14:56:35

I speak American first

I am so sorry for you.

If you did not know you that you must be a home school kid,

And you must you be a publik scool kid.  I'm trying to speak "American" here.  Did I get it right?  roll

#83 Re: Human missions » Article about colonizing Mars - Does someone remember this? » 2005-02-07 21:56:40

What are you guys talking about?

Every early Martian settler will be a scientist.  Do you think they'll all just sit around watching football and drinking beer after putting in 40 hrs/wk at their stupid job?  No!  This is the cream of the crop here.  They'll use every spare minute to explore, invent, build, and learn about Mars.  Even if some are stuck with non-scientific jobs, they will have scientific hobbies.

Martian Settlers Wanted, middle class 9 to 5 office workers that demand time off and good working conditions need not apply.

#84 Re: Not So Free Chat » Diabetes - Just been diagnosed. » 2005-02-07 14:07:48

Thanks, Cindy.

I've read about a lot of alternatives to needles, and I'm sure she'll switch someday.  You know, my wife and I have practiced on eachother and it doesn't hurt at all.  But, she's a kid and it scares her anyway.

#85 Re: Not So Free Chat » Mars Frontier Novel - New web location » 2005-02-07 14:00:29

Ooo...oooo...
I hate to use my kid's sickness for others' entertainment, but...

You'll have to write in a diabetic kid on Mars.  No insulin for treatment, a mad dash to produce it/extract it from animals.  In a few weeks I'll probably have all the material you need, sadly enough.

#86 Re: Not So Free Chat » New free chat issue - Opinions? » 2005-02-07 13:54:57

Mono-culture (all grains being the exact same gen-mod species) is pretty damn risky, IMHO.

Here's how the ancient Incas did it - http://www.personal.psu.edu/users/m/j/m … .html]Peru.

These people are also the more likely to employ traditional methods of crop organization, such as growing many different species together in the same field.  There are a few reasons for this “heterogeneity of species,” as Daniel Gade puts it.  One reason for this practice is for insurance, so that if a disease or blight comes along and wipes out a species, the farmers will still have crops to harvest.

Imagine a future world with 100% GMO wheat -- all the same species.  A blight comes along and wipes out the entire world production of wheat.  Sounds like a good idea for a Sci-fi novel. smile

#87 Re: Not So Free Chat » Diabetes - Just been diagnosed. » 2005-02-07 13:39:51

Hey Dook, don't take that personally.  You just looked like a good punching bag.  I have to lash out at someone, right?  big_smile

#88 Re: Not So Free Chat » Diabetes - Just been diagnosed. » 2005-02-07 13:37:46

Thanks for explaining type 1 to clark, Dook, I just didn't feel like doing it.   sad

Oh, and SHUT UP about the negative crap, man!  It's hard enough watching her cry every time we stick her with that damned needle.

Minimum of 4 finger pricks per day to check blood sugar levels.
Minimum of 2 shots of insulin per day.

Did I mention this sucks?

#89 Re: Not So Free Chat » New free chat issue - Opinions? » 2005-02-07 13:26:59

Any one that lives in the USA has ate large amounts of GM food stuffs with no ill effect. Their is no such thing as Frankenfood, it only exist in simple minded folk that ride the short bus.

First of all, if your going to talk about the "short bus" maybe you should learn how to type.  I can hardly understand your posts.  If English is not your first language, I'd say you're doing great.  Otherwise, it looks like you're just too lazy to type coherently.

Now, about the essence of your post:

My daughter just got diabetes.  They don't know what causes it, so you can't rule out "Frankenfoods".  They also don't know what causes autism and many other deseases.

Both autism and diabetes are thought to be caused by genetic defects and/or chemicals in the environment among other things.  Just because GMOs and their associated chemical fertilizers don't kill you right away doesn't mean that they won't affect you or later generations down the road.

I'm not really anti-GMO, but these things may have serious long term effects.  You can't just blow off objections to their use and call those objectors retarded.

As for short term effects of GMOs, Bill clearly stated the unethical marketing of them to poor farmers that can't use them correctly.  That is a much more pressing concern than the "Frankenfood" issue, as I'm sure you can agree.

http://www.breastfeeding.com/advocacy/a … .html]More unethical marketing to poor countries.

#91 Re: Human missions » Finally, a sensible solution to the Hubble debate - ... that we can all agree on...maybe. » 2005-02-05 00:22:42

I vote in favor of financing the future.

Me too.

I'm an environmentalist and all, but sometimes it is just better to throw something away.  What I don't want is for Nasa to scrap the Hubble and then not replace it soon.  The public needs pictures -- not UV or X-ray data -- pictures.

Wow the audience and they'll clamor for more.  On with Hubble II!

#92 Re: Not So Free Chat » Diabetes - Just been diagnosed. » 2005-02-04 23:47:20

Thanks everybody.  I just got back from Denver.  They have a good research facility there also.  My head is still spinning from all the info they threw at me.

It's bad enough, all the suffering adults go through in this world. But it always seems so much worse when a little child has to go through it.

You said it, man.  It's a freakin' life long desease!
:bars:  doesn't come close to expressing how I feel.  It's more like  :bars2:  :angry:  :realllymad:

#93 Re: Not So Free Chat » Diabetes - Just been diagnosed. » 2005-02-03 09:37:18

Well, I was up half the night at the hospital with my 4 year old daughter.

She has type 1 diabetes.

#94 Re: Not So Free Chat » Any poets? - Comments, CONSTRUCTIVE critisism, ideas. » 2005-02-01 15:23:23

Thanks, clark.

And yes, they did get to hear all of it.

Borrowed your form a bit Ian.

Golly gee... you shouldn't have.  big_smile

I see how you followed the rhyming pattern...

A
A
B
B
A

But you didn't copy the number of syllables...

8
8
6
6
8

...slacker!  :;):

This structure has a name, but I can't remember it.
I'll have to brush up on my poetry vocabulary.  I must have been too busy drawing rockets during all those English classes.

#95 Re: Not So Free Chat » Mars Frontier Novel - New web location » 2005-01-31 14:21:05

Aaaah!!!
Seven?!

What are you trying to do, kill me?   tongue

#96 Re: Water on Mars » Do you think that Earth will like Mars? » 2005-01-30 09:35:01

By the way your writing seems on natural, you must not be every good at english.

I would ask the same of you, Earthfirst.  Is English your native language?

#97 Re: Unmanned probes » Cassini-Huygens III - Continued from previous » 2005-01-28 13:02:06

As I understand it, the blurry photos were pointing straight down and at a downward angle.  So, when the surface shot was taken with the side facing camera the other two would be out of focus or covered with dirt.

#98 Re: Not So Free Chat » Mars Frontier Novel - New web location » 2005-01-28 12:54:56

Good stuff.  I can't wait to see what happens to Columbus 8.  Hey, just to spice it up you should have an all Spanish speaking crew on say... Colon Nueve.   :;):

#99 Re: Not So Free Chat » 10 lb meteor hits vietnam » 2005-01-28 12:50:55

Initial investigations by explosives experts still clearing the bombs and mines left behind from Cambodia's years of civil war against Pol Pot's guerrillas have not yielded many results.

It's sad that the first experts to investigate it were de-miners.   sad
If only they could have geologists scouring the fields instead of bomb experts...

#100 Re: Not So Free Chat » Any poets? - Comments, CONSTRUCTIVE critisism, ideas. » 2005-01-26 20:11:19

Well, this isn't about Mars, but what the heck.  I make up stories for my kids at bedtime, and one night this poem just came to me.  The kids only heard the first five lines, but you lucky dogs get to read all of it!


Herm the Worm

Now there once was a wiggly worm,
And he went by the name of Herm.
He wiggled and wriggled
And jiggled and giggled.
What a jolly old worm was Herm!

The name Herm was short for Herman,
But sometimes they called him Sherman.
What a laugh he would have.
It made everyone glad.
He said his name must be German!

Now everyone laughed at this mess,
For Herm seemed to be in distress.
No, not German, they drink.
You are Scottish we think,
For you look so good in a dress!

Now Herm started to yell and shout,
"You had better all go.  Get out!"
He was jolly and such,
But he'd just had too much.
So he frowned and started to pout.

Head sagging like flowers that wilt,
Herm stared at the walls he had built.
His friends act like vultures
But don't know their cultures,
For it's not a dress -- it's a kilt!

Now Herm called his friends with a smile,
"Come back to my house in a while."
Bearing gifts to the fore,
He'd meet them at the door,
And he'd wear his kilt -- 'twas his style.

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