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#1 2005-08-07 12:20:50

John Creighton
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Re: Off Color Poems

I’ve created this thread because I am not sure the following poem is tame enough for public viewing. If you think it is I’ll post it there instead.

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#2 2005-08-07 12:21:28

John Creighton
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Re: Off Color Poems

Make Love Not War

As he crawled into the enemies bed
With flowers and songs of great ideals
He rose with expectations unreal
of a peaceful consummation and deal

taken hard from behind
the package he did not expect to find
what seemed right put him in a compromising position
what root cause led to this disposition

in naked honesty came the blatant truth
they dicked around with the naive youth
promises of a peaceful reconciliation
were the propaganda of perverted information

the crime was not the act of flesh
but the lie the bread the hate and death
they hate our songs and think our flowers a joke
of a decadent enemy that is an easy poke.

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#3 2005-08-10 21:16:34

clark
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Re: Off Color Poems

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#4 2005-08-10 22:42:33

John Creighton
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Re: Off Color Poems

Ah! I have some dusty pieces that fit this mold...

Flirt

Dancing twisting shadowed face
across spectrums fading memory,
Moving bodies congealing
light and lithe slipping into daydream fancies.
Eye winks with shared smile
lips pressing together
Infinite moment stops the beat
rythem still ebbing
your arms still walking through
body and soul,
singing my desire electric
sizzle-burn smoke-churn
beat beat beat
forever moment
dancing upon the tongue
down my spine
lost in merging past or future
who can tell?
the present is now, in this second
this first breath, your breath
and I feel coarse fingers
cool and soft against burning cheek
under my shirt
as you hands slip down my thighs
until the moment shatters like rain drops
and I am left waiting for that unspeakable feeling
of sin
and waving goodbye.

Trying to picture the seen. It seems to make the most scene inside a bar or just outside a bar and I don’t think you can take a tongue down someone’s spine in a bar, well maybe you could if you were dancing behind them, either a guy without a shirt or a girl with a shirt with her back bare or in a topless bar. Does it have any hidden messages or is it just about that experience. Flirting is great for people young and without much experience. Might change as you get older more experienced and grow to expect more.

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