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Another pair of pretty short stories introducing 2 characters who will be key players in SSI's mission to establish a free, independent Mars settlement:
Annika and Marco
Update:
For all you SpaceX fans (and SpaceX critics?) here's a short story depicting the first human landing on Mars - in a SpaceX Red Dragon II capsule. So already some of you may be scratching your heads or flexing your critic typing fingers! Elon Musk and his amazing engineers have decided for now that Red Dragon may not be carrying out propulsive landings: SpaceFlightNow article
Here's a quote from that article:
“The reason we decided not to pursue (powered landings) heavily is it would have taken a tremendous amount of effort to qualify that for safety, particularly for crew transport,” Musk said. “And then there was a time when I thought that the Dragon approach to landing on Mars, where you’ve got a base heat shield and side-mounted thrusters, would be the right way to land on Mars, but now I’m pretty confident that is not the right way, and that there’s a far better approach.”
“It could be something that we bring back later, but it doesn’t seem like the right way to apply resources right now.”
So they've backed off from the propulsive landings in order to get the Dragon qualified with NASA for crewed missions to and from ISS. Good focus.
But, hey, this is fiction, so I can write what I like! Anyway, my Red Dragon II is the Mark Two - the engineers overcome their problems in a few years and upgrade the RD so that the service module trunk stays attached and provides the necessary power and life support (etc...) so that RD II can land safely on the surface of Mars. But still, it's a hair-raising ride, which I hope you will enjoy.
If there are any comments... be my guest, either here or on the blog itself at Ice And Fire , the new instalment of my slowly-growing epic. If you have solid technical advice on how to make this story more realistic, please, please post or email me and if it's sound advice I will at least give you an acknowledgement somewhere.
Currently I'm writing the back story of two more characters, and should be posted to the blog within the next month or two, summer vacations permitting.
Postscript:
Same article, E.Musk also says:
“Plan is to do powered landings on Mars for sure, but with a vastly bigger ship,” he tweeted Wednesday after his remarks in Washington.
So maybe they are looking into no powered Mars landing until their giant ITS is operational. But I'm sorry, that doesn't fit my fiction plan. 50 or 100 characters at once is too much for my meagre talent. Kim Stanley Robinson managed it, mainly by not introducing us to most of the First 100, but I'm happy starting with small crews who set up base camp for the larger settlement teams in the ITS ships.
Update:
The series now includes these short stories, with another in the planning stage:
- Kayaks and Cosmonauts
- Don Luther is faced with the choice of committing himself to the Mars mission.
- Cosmonaut Komarova is on the last ISS crew before decommissioning. How can she follow that?
- Simulator: Tensions grow unbearably as major flaws in the SSI Mars Mission come to light.
- Going Red: How is the crew going to build a new world if they can't stand each other anymore?
Yes Tom that's a succinct overview of the differences as far as I remember. It's fantasy vs fiction. That's also how I aim to write science fiction (at least the short stories on settling Mars) - somewhat realistic, not the heroic, epic approach, but still hopefully enough plot twists and surprises to make a good story.
I started reading Ryley Nickel's story and it's somewhere further towards the epic, space opera style, although there's plenty of realism. An enjoyable read.
Writing is hard.
I'll second that! One main hardship for me is just to find the time. I've started writing so many stories in my life that I never finished because real life got too busy and by the time I got back to the writing, I'd lost interest or forgotten what motivated me to write it.
So I've adopted a cunning plan: instead of writing 'chapters' I am calling them 'short stories'. I have an overall game plan for the whole story and main characters, and getting one short story finished feels pretty good.
I hope your novel writing goes better than my short-story writing! I will look up your website and have a read.
Maybe they could be used in a role playing game such as Traveller for instance.
Hey Tom, I used to play Traveller. Does it still exist? This was about 30+ years ago! I loved the open-ended adventure, exploration aspect of it. Sadly v few of my friends could see that... they were DnD fanatics!
Here's more of an intro to the story:
Not far into the future, the first steps have been taken on Mars. The next frontier is finally open. Many players are gathering their teams; many plans are being laid. Companies are developing the systems and technologies they will need to stake their claim and build a lasting settlement in unforgiving conditions.
One of these teams is a corporation named Sabir Space Industries. The goal of its CEO and majority shareholder, Nowal No'man, is to make Mars an independent world where mankind can begin again. She is recruiting a band of explorers and dreamers, experts and cast-offs, students and scientists and engineers and astronauts, while struggling to keep her company free from the heavy hand of Big Money.
But even from within her own company and from among her relatives the threat comes quicker than she had expected. How will it be possible to keep the dream alive? Or was the dream nothing but a fantasy?
Don Luther, PhD, lectures in Planetary Science at the University of Washington, Seattle, while researching the climate history of the Red Planet. He would love a chance to research the climate and geology of Mars first-hand and even to settle the big questions of life on Mars. But his wife has made it clear she isn't going along with his dreams. What can he do?
Abdul Qawi is many things, but stupid isn't one of them. He has led a hard life as a petty criminal, a Yemeni soldier and an intelligence officer and now finds a chance to work with his distant relative, Nowal No'man, in Dubai, using his energetic intellect to solve technical challenges. The ultimate adventure of exploring Mars beckons irresistibly, but he doesn't seem to have the right skill set to work his way onto the crew. Is there a way to beat the system? And what would it cost him if he did?
Follow the stories of these and other characters as the first SSI crew trains and launches, and lands on Mars at last.
Of course, landing is just the beginning. It doesn't get any easier from here onwards. In fact, death is always just one small accident away. But for those who survive and thrive, a new world is beckoning.
If a 'company town' or 'university town' can have a governing board of elected representatives, or even that everyone employed there gets a vote or a say on decisions, then that could be a great model to start with and still allow some return on investment if required. Some checks & balances so that people preserve dignity & some freedoms.
Then again, from what I can tell, Elon Musk isn't in this for profit - he's a visionary who needs to make profit in order to accomplish his real goals.
Second short story is posted on the 'New World Rising' page.
...Using sacred numbers, Gothic engineers strived to make cathedrals a kind of Heaven on Earth, a sacred place for transporting medieval minds from their daily lives of toil to the lofty heights of eternity.
Even the floor plan of the cathedral is the ultimate Christian symbol of salvation, the crucifix.
STEPHEN MURRAY: The building is a vehicle. It takes you somewhere else. A cathedral, in a sense, is a medium; it's a transport. It takes us to heaven.
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That is fascinating. Yes I had some idea of how medieval architects viewed their work as symbolic of spiritual realities. Until then I had seen them as a misuse of money that could have been spent helping build a better nation and helping the poor.
The '144' thing isn't necessarily a mystic number (with some it would have been perhaps) - it was originally symbolic of God's chosen people - the 12 tribes of Israel, then the 12 apostles. So a building with those dimensions would signify 'this is the place where God's people will live and worship!'
We all know, I hope, how good architecture can inspire awe and reflection, and a sense of order and rightness. My hope for Mars settlements is that people will realise they have been 'chosen' in some way to do something significant with their lives, to build a new society founded on deep respect for others, fairness, restraining self-interest for the interests of all. So whether it's 12km x 12km or 12 leagues x 12 leagues, that's fine. Or some other number that inspires people in the right direction!
I just spent most of an evening finishing off my income tax return. It wasn't as bad as it could have been, but I am stunned by the depth of tax-ese those forms are written in and how we have ended up with so many fiddling details. I'm very very grateful for the software that guided me through that maze. So I vowed to write one more post today:
Note to future Mars settlers: do not bring this excessively over-developed concept of INCOME TAX with you!
Here's the plan:
1 - Keep government small and cheap!
2 - If government needs funding from citizens, use a flat poll tax or something SIMPLE!
3 - Prepare an indoctrination video for kids that shows the nightmare of filing income tax returns. And while you're at it, maybe make one about lawyers and one about politicians and another about advertising executives.
4 - I'm not entirely serious about the above. There must be good lawyers out there somewhere. And seriously, if whatever government we have isn't run by our contributions in some way, it's no longer accountable and could start doing whatever it wants.
5 - end of rant.
Fair enough - it's south and east, not north. But to get to it we drive north, so forgive my confusion!
Scott, that's quite a piece of work. I have no idea if it will fly - I hope you get somewhere with it - just a couple of notes:
- You probably know that most Europeans work in km
- Your point about there being resource-rich dirt around asteroid impacts is right, I think. A few hundred kilometres north of us is Sudbury, an ancient impact crater (though latest research suggests it could have been a comet) and Sudbury has a huge number of mines for metals etc etc. Actually some of the ejecta from that impact landed in our town! Glad nobody was here at the time...
JohnX wrote:- This one's even older - from 1998! Wow, did they even use computers back then?
You added a wink, but I have to point out we did.
Definitely a wink! My first computer was a Sinclair ZX-81, which came with precisely 1kB of RAM and no hard drive! I studied at uni 1985-88, just when TCP/IP was this brand-new mysterious thing we studied, as if it was quantum computing or something. Anyway, enough off-topic stuff from me!
That's quite atmospheric, the way you bring out two real people's moods and a bit of their personalities. I was puzzled about Aydyn - is he actually depressed? The story title says it all. But he ends up going to the greenhouses as a kind of therapy. I can understand that. (not sure what his occupation is though)
Well, another big event is Central Canada Comic Con. Another genre event, not space. .....
You live an interesting life.
Well we had Chris Hadfield through to speak at the community auditorium a couple of years ago and I found him to be a pretty good speaker. Then the NASA Planetary Science director Jim (Green?) stopped by a couple of weeks ago at the university to speak about the search for life - but not mainly about Mars, so he had a very wide scope and that was educational, and a very well attended event - a lecture hall and an overflow both crammed with people.
As much as I'm interested in all this, I can't see myself starting a Mars Society branch in T Bay!
Reestablishment of the National Space Council
I believe that we should prepare a report that describes the kinds of political and economic systems we would like to see established on Mars, and that we should present that report to the National Space Council.
Good idea. It's worth doing well. Not sure I'll be much help for a while, but go for it.
Food for thought? I went surfing for some other opinions on how Mars should be governed. It's hard to spot any angles that this forum hasn't covered. Maybe someone here will find a gem.
- The BBC got in there a few years ago with this piece. It mentions Charles Cockell, an astrobiologist at Edinburgh University whose name cropped up as a reference in one of the Blue Marble Institute papers.
- This one's even older - from 1998! Wow, did they even use computers back then? It's a 'White Paper' by Edward L. Hudgins of the 'Cato Institute' and I haven't read it all yet, but his aim is to discuss: 'Thus to ...make it [Mars] another home for the human race, an economic-political system will have to emerge that allows individuals or voluntary associations of individuals to secure exclusive rights to use resources and to exchanges freely with others, and that protects property, and enforces contracts.' Agree? Disagree?
- This question in Quora 'What-type-of-government...' mentions Red/Green/Blue Mars : '...a new model of economics and decentralized political control...' - as well as the example of the US Constitution and scientific bases in Antarctica; also people throw in 'chaos theory', the Wild West, Law of the Jungle, the tyranny of strict control over resources and so on.
A note of interest: When running my search, newmars.com/forum posts came up a few times too, as you'd expect. Getting people thinking and talking about these questions is a healthy thing, I believe.
From what I've read (not having much background in rocketry) LH2 has difficulties in storage, and needs big tanks because it's not so dense.
LCH4 can be manufactured on Mars (as can LH2 obviously) as long as there's water-ice and power. And certain catalysts. But you all know that already. You're looking at other fuels such as hydrazine for a descent stage & attitude control, right? Can hydrazine be simply manufactured ISRU-wise?
Who cares whether Mars is free of Earth's domination or not? There aren't any Martian residents to state an opinion on the matter, for all we know they might be fine with it!
Very true. Who are we to speak for them. The trouble would be if they are not fine with it. Getting free of 'domination' might involve a lengthy process of dispute, activism, political struggle, even armed struggle. That's great if we want to re-live Kim Stanley Robinson's novels, but not great for the people who have to live through it.
Isn't it better that Mars be free? As has been often stated in this thread & elsewhere, if there's even one Earth-based country, company or group with sovereignty or control over a patch of Mars or the settlers there, soon there could be many, then that leads pretty surely to conflicting claims and division. Much harder to reverse that and unite Mars later.
Is this a clash of visions? Some want Mars to continue what we do on Earth - making money, profits for the shareholders back home, being the best & strongest; others want to start again & try for something better.
“A forum such as the Mars Society could be a way for many 'little people' to get together and do something magnificent, like ensuring that Mars is free from Earth's domination from the start”. — John Peace
https://johnmpeace.blogspot.ca/2017/03/ … orums.html
The members of the New Mars Forums should adopt a “Mars Development Plan” that will ensure “that Mars is free from Earth’s domination from the start”.
For the purposes of discussion, let’s start at a point that is about 200 miles south by southeast of Fesenkov Crater.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fesenkov_(Martian_crater)
That crater is near to the eastern edge of the “Tharsis Region” of Mars.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tharsis
Fesenkov Crater it is shown on the Lunae Palus quadrangle map of Mars.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:USGS … n-mola.png
Our Mars Development Plan might provide that (1) a spaceport will be built at 85 degrees west longitude and 15 degrees north latitude, (2) six permanent human settlements will be constructed within 20 miles of the spaceport, (3) those settlements will organize a Tharsis Transportation Cooperative, (4) the cooperative will be governed by a Board of Regents composed of 6 Regents, and (5) each settlement will elect one Regent.
The Cooperative will invite SpaceX and Blue Origin and Mars One and other rocket companies to land their rockets at the Cooperative’s spaceport. The Cooperative will operate a fleet of ground vehicles that transport people and supplies between the spaceport and the surrounding settlements, and from one settlement to another.
Each settlement will control a land grant that contains 144 square miles. The government of a settlement may adopt parcel maps that divide the lands of the settlement into parcels of various sizes. A settlement may lease parcels to people and organizations. A settlement may use lease payments to purchase shares in the Tharsis Transportation Cooperative or to pay for settlement infrastructure. Some lease agreements may include an option to purchase the parcel at a future time.
To be continued…
It sounds like the right kind of initiative to get things started. I like it, but some 'realistic' drawbacks:
- not many in SpaceX et.al. may want to settle Tharsis - see NASA's search for an ideal settling point for example: 'The first human landing sites workshop in 2015 yielded 47 landing site proposals. ' - NASA landing site workshop
- Are you anticipating that the Cooperative gets there first and builds a spaceport? Or are we just calling the location a spaceport in anticipation? At first landings there won't be anything there; the Cooperative wouldn't have anything to offer (unless it was v v well funded and could send its own autonomous infrastructure landers for robotic construction)
- Out of interest, how did you choose 'Regent' for the board members?
So possibly to add to your plan:
- Open a public debate among involved parties to choose one best site to start this settlement - get maximum agreement
- Develop and promote this model for use wherever rockets land; it may help the unity of all the growing areas & settlements in future if they're all run in a similar style but with enough flexibility to express each group's uniqueness
I have some ideas for the administration of Mars, mostly articulated in this thread but not entirely, that I can certainly e-mail to anyone who's interested. What's your e-mail address JohnX?
Look beneath my name on any of my posts. Click 'email'! I'm not sure I want to put my actual address out there for the public (and spam bots), but on a 1-to-1 basis it's fine.
Given such protections for colonies, I think a corporation might be able to make money transporting colonists to Mars and selling them what they need. I think, though, that in the early stages it will be selling transport and equipment to governments rather than individuals. Get the space agencies to pay for putting in the infrastructure, then the costs can be lowered for the settlers following later.
You sound like SpaceX - transporting people to Mars. Competing with Musk would be a tough race!
We might see a number of people willing to raise silly amounts of money to get to Mars, especially super-rich adventurers, scientists backed by wealthy institutions.
Yes some space agencies would be sane enough to pay for the ride rather than building their own stuff at 10x the price! (know who I mean?)
Cool! Thunder Bay. Winnipeg has a science fiction convention every May long weekend: May 19-21. I always give a presentation about real space exploration: NASA, ESA, CSA, etc. It's an 8½ hour drive along highway 17. Or 1½ hour flight. Interested in coming to Keycon? It's mostly science fiction and fantasy, but a fun weekend-long party. Interested?
Yes, interested; able to come: not so much. Our family is already stretched by our 2 sons' soccer (aka football) tournaments. It is great to live in Thunder Bay but it's a long way to most other places apart from the lake & the forest!
A few of the soccer events are in Winnipeg. If one coincides with any of your events I'd surely try to attend.
Do any of you (Scott, Robert, being the main contributors; also Terraformer, Tom, Louis if you're reading this) have all of your proposal for a Mars system together in one document? It sounds like you do, or at least it's all a complete plan in your head.
Would any of you be willing to email your whole plan to each other, to me, to Mars Society 'management' (if such a thing exists) so that all these great ideas don't disappear down the sink-hole? I'm sure it's completely valid for the Mars Society members to produce plans that conflict in many details or even in their overall philosophy. After all, such diversity may help some future would-be-settlers to think it all through for themselves.